Daily Deviation
Given 2010-03-10
Jellyfish bubbles - Ponyo by *sylphielmetallium has a beautiful use of colours and the composition is fantastic! The idea is very well thought and the little girl is simply adorable, seems like she's having fun. <3 (
Suggested by ^KasumiCR and Featured by
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All those "JELLYFISH BUBBLES" are a good sign,that this has astounded me by how detailed by the colors and textures of the picture. Ponyo alone is very detailed also since she is underwater and you have matched it well with her hair and clothes swaying with the currents.
Now onto some critique . As much as I love the work on little Ponyo there there is something that bothers me about her body shape. It's the part where her legs go into her 'bloomers'. To me it just seems that she's a little lopsided in the lower part of her body, and while i can understand you were going for fore-shortening it does give her an odd body shape. I think it's the positioning of her legs, her right leg needs to be further across to give her balance, and also stop her lower half looking quite so elongated.
I hope this crit has been a little useful. Other than that I have no major critique to add and really like this image!
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